Lede 4: A proposed bill will increase the penalties for committing identity theft in Towson, where rates lie above the national average.
Lede 5: A $1.2 million grant to Towson school districts will support the Community Helping Hands program, a leading effort to help at-risk youth, according to the Maryland State Commission on Criminal Sentencing Policy.
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Great ledes, Lauren. I like both a lot. They are one sentence, follow ap style and are written in active voice. One thing we haven't talked about is how to use numbers effectively. Do you think it's confusing to have two numbers in lede #4? Is there any way to simplify that ratio?
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